Is this usable?

Double post...

Could someone PLEASE give me feedback..

Actually mods, it might be an interesting idea to have a "photo edit feedback" sticky... That way people who want advice can get it, and people who want to give advice can give it.

Gordon, sorry. Matt wins. You can read the words on your edit, not in Gordon's. You may get an overexposed on Gordo's.

First one is dark, second one is overblown.

Yeah, thats what I thought, I will boost the brightness on it.

Alright, changed some shadow/highlights and boosted the brightness, what do you guys think?:

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p...tngIND24-2.jpg

That looks better, just watch the angle, I might have waited until she turn more to the right or came closer.